"Several recent surveys indicate that home owners are increasingly eager to conserve energy. At the same time, manufacturers are now marketing many home appliances, such as refrigerators and air conditioners, that are almost twice as energy efficient as those sold a decade ago. Also, new technologies for better home insulation and passive solar heating are readily available to reduce the energy needed for home heating. Therefore, the total demand for electricity in our area will not increase — and may decline slightly. Since our three electric generating plants in operation for the past twenty years have always met our needs, construction of new generating plants will not be necessary."
The argument states that there is a more pervasive feeling of conservation of energy among home owners as well as manufacturers also new technology is being used for finding solution to reduce energy required for home heating on the basis of it the argument concludes that the demand for electricity will not increase rather decrease and because of which the the current supply will be sufficient to meet the future requirement and as a result three new generating plants will not be necessary. The argument makes a number of unwarranted claims regarding the consumptions of energy and the positive outcomes of new technology which seems fallacious.
Firstly, The argument presents the result of a survey which home owners are increasingly eager to conserve energy which is seems untrue as majority of people are not concerned with consevation of energy rather they want cut on their cost and have a personal vendatta in it. Though their is a increase in the efficiency of home appliances but overall number of increase in number of appliances which ultimately compensates for the efficiency increase of applications thus the enery consumptions increase highly.
Secondly, The technology used for home insulation and passive solar heating though are readily available does not indicate energy onsumption in creating such products the other fails to account for the factors other than just direct energy consumption by these products. also these new technology contributes to environmental issue which are created by production of such technology thus cause other environmental issues.
Finally, The argument states that the total demand of electricty will not increase and may even decline which sound dubious given the rapid rise in poplulation the city and increasing in amount of electronics used by people will probably cause rise in use of energy. also other inventions uses energy such as electric cars. The pervasive use of such cars will increase the consumption of energy which the argument fails to account. also makes an assumption that as past energy requirment was matched. therefore the future requirement will be met which is not true as the consumption will probably increase from other sources also.
Furthermore, the argument claims that three power plants are adequate to meet the requirements but does not consider the fact that the efficiency of the three power plants is gradually decreasing because of wearing out and hence may not even meet current requirement therefore new powerplants may be needed.
In conclusion, The argument as it seems falls apart, the argument is not backed evidence and requires further comprehensive evaluation based on which future decision are to be taken. the current argument fails to account for many pertinent issues related to the topic which should be considered before moving forward.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 453 350
No. of Characters: 2367 1500
No. of Different Words: 199 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.613 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.225 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.798 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 180 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 130 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 103 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 50.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.677 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.472 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.833 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.124 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... as manufacturers also new technology is being used for finding solution to reduc...
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...e argument concludes that the demand for electricity will not increase rather dec...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
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Suggestion: the
...se rather decrease and because of which the the current supply will be sufficient to me...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
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Suggestion: the; the
...se rather decrease and because of which the the current supply will be sufficient to me...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ufficient to meet the future requirement and as a result three new generating pla...
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...have a personal vendatta in it. Though their is a increase in the efficiency of home...
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...t energy consumption by these products. also these new technology contributes to en...
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Suggestion: also,
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Suggestion: therefore,
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...issues related to the topic which should be considered before moving forward. ...
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... be considered before moving forward.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 16.3942115768 165% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2460.0 2260.96107784 109% => OK
No of words: 453.0 441.139720559 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43046357616 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83373038992 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44591611479 0.468620217663 95% => OK
syllable_count: 771.3 705.55239521 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.8473053892 140% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.737187606 57.8364921388 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.714285714 119.503703932 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3571428571 23.324526521 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 5.70786347227 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 5.15768463074 446% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.25449101796 419% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153021420646 0.218282227539 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604118917523 0.0743258471296 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049256870983 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510220578704 0.128457276422 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559095427294 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 14.3799401198 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 48.3550499002 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.197005988 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.5979740519 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 98.500998004 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 12.3882235529 238% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.1389221557 133% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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