Since those issues of Newsbeat magazine that featured political news on their front cover were the poorest-selling issues over the past three years, the publisher of Newsbeat has recommended that the magazine curtail its emphasis on politics to focus more exclusively on economics and personal finance. She points to a recent survey of readers of general interest magazines that indicates greater reader interest in economic issues than in political ones. Newsbeat's editor, however, opposes the proposed shift in editorial policy, pointing out that very few magazines offer extensive political coverage anymore
The above argument presents two views regarding the sales of 'Newsbeat' magazine.Now,choosing or commenting on which of these is better is subjected to derieving the assumptions or solid facts with regards to which the two opposing claims were made.
Speaking in favour of the Editor as opposed to the publisher, it becomes necesssary to know if the sales of those issues which didn't feature political news on the front page displayed a substantitive increase.
if it did,which topics were they talking about and how many copies were soldought to be known.Thus talking in numbers would help us come upto a proper conclusion.
Secondly,it is also worthnoting the audience to which the magazine caters.If the audience mostly comprises of businesmen,brokers or investors of the sorts,in depth political view is unlikely to attract them.
It is very important to sell it to th proper audeince. This having said,was there any different strategiess choosen to market different issues also is a concern then.
Also the basis on which the publisher is maing claims to shift the emphasis, is that even a trustworthy source?
The editor also should know if there are any fundamental shortcomings in the content of the magazine.
Although the people have interest in the political scenario, is the magazine doing an honest job? Does it provide true views an suggesstions , which appeal to the people or does it simply propagate any specific agenda?
Thus it wuld be better to conclude by saying that unless both the parties have sufficient data, having supporting matter with convincable figures, it would be unwise to make any decision.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 274 350
No. of Characters: 1326 1500
No. of Different Words: 164 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.069 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.839 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.644 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.337 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.898 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 9 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Now
...egarding the sales of Newsbeat magazine.Now,choosing or commenting on which of thes...
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Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , choosing
...rding the sales of Newsbeat magazine.Now,choosing or commenting on which of these is bett...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...know if the sales of those issues which didnt feature political news on the front pag...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...e displayed a substantitive increase. if it did,which topics were they talking a...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ed a substantitive increase. if it did,which topics were they talking about and how ...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... many copies were soldought to be known.Thus talking in numbers would help us come u...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ome upto a proper conclusion. Secondly,it is also worthnoting the audience to whi...
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Suggestion: If
...e audience to which the magazine caters.If the audience mostly comprises of busine...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... magazine caters.If the audience mostly comprises of businesmen,brokers or investors of the ...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , brokers
... audience mostly comprises of businesmen,brokers or investors of the sorts,in depth poli...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...nesmen,brokers or investors of the sorts,in depth political view is unlikely to att...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , was
... to th proper audeince. This having said,was there any different strategiess choosen...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ferent issues also is a concern then. Also the basis on which the publisher is mai...
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Line 15, column 126, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... honest job? Does it provide true views an suggesstions , which appeal to the peop...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...es it provide true views an suggesstions , which appeal to the people or does it s...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...simply propagate any specific agenda? Thus it wuld be better to conclude by sayin...
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Line 17, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...da? Thus it wuld be better to conclude by saying that unless both the parties h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 55.5748502994 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 2260.96107784 61% => OK
No of words: 264.0 441.139720559 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21212121212 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02333631569 2.78398813304 109% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.468620217663 127% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 705.55239521 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.149651308 57.8364921388 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.70786347227 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 5.15768463074 174% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148301678085 0.218282227539 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506080406302 0.0743258471296 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511523781361 0.0701772020484 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0539834277825 0.128457276422 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498360580406 0.0628817314937 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.3799401198 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32208582834 115% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 98.500998004 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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