of the two leading brands of automobiles launched in past year, prancer cars are clearly more superior to the competing acer cars. prancer cars boast aesthetically pleasing design and a fuel economy of 30kms per gallon. in the past quarter alone, 5000 prancer cars were sold. Acer cars, on the other hand have received only a few positive reviews regarding thier overall performances. I have personally test driven both brand cars and I strongly recomment that you buy a prancer car for superior performance at an affordable price.
Even Though after reading the paragrapgh the conclusion of the author looks convincing and good but he has made many unwarranted assumptions while doing that.
First of all,the author states that Prancer cars boast aesthetically pleasing design and a fuel economy of 30 km per gallon.But in the above paragraph they haven't mentioned anything about fuel economy and design of Prancer cars. Even if we assume that the things mentioned by the author are true still fuel economy and design are not the only criteria on which performance of the car is decided. We need to look as the top speed of the car,seating capacity,maximum torque produced by the car and many other criterias. For example,Cybertruck produced by the Tesla Cars didnt had aesthetically pleasing design and didin;t had good fuel economy,but it was robust and had a good maximum torque was best to do the assigned workk when compared with its contemporaries.
Also the author mentioned about the sales of Prancer cars in the past quarter and Acer cars received only few positive reviews regarding their overall performance,but didn't mentioned anything about sales of Acer cars in that particular quarter. So even if we assume that the sales of the Prancer cars were more as compared to Acer cars in the last quarter it doesn't mean that it was same in the previous 3 quarters because no information has been provided regarding previous 3 quarters beacuse the cars were launched one year ago as mentioned in the above paasage.Also few is a vague term because few it can 10 or 100 or 1000 or even more positive review so author should have clearly mentioned the number of reviews.
Also the author stated that he has personally test driven both brands, and he strongly recommends to buy Prancer car for superior performance at an affordable price. To tell about the test drive of the car it is important to know the knowledge of the author in the particular field and on what basis he decided that driving Prancer cars was more comfortable. Even if the author felt good while driving the Prancer Cars we can't buy a car based on the review of a single person.Also as I mentioned above the author stated about superior performance at affordable price then he hasn't mentioned the price of car and also the price of Acer Car. Because for example,10 lakh Rupees can be a affordable price for a rich person but a high price for a middle class person. Also the has not mentioned the price difference between Prancer cars and Acer cars.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 446 350
No. of Characters: 2034 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.596 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.561 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.477 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 37.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.964 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.917 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.431 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.652 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.253 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, regarding, so, still, then, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 431.0 441.139720559 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83526682135 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74612566601 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 204.123752495 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450116009281 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 705.55239521 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.8473053892 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.839437629 57.8364921388 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.666666667 119.503703932 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.9166666667 23.324526521 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.70786347227 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.25449101796 552% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371753915535 0.218282227539 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156703099851 0.0743258471296 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965148968791 0.0701772020484 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199651370177 0.128457276422 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119523954719 0.0628817314937 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 14.3799401198 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 48.3550499002 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.197005988 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.1389221557 144% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.9071856287 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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