The writer has reasoned the recent rise of vandalism in Carlton County to the rise of immigrants to the region. The writer has based this claim on the opinion of the citizens of Carlton County. However the writer has not considered certain possibilities which could prove this stament wrong.
First of all the causes for the vandalism has not been looked upon. The increase in vandalism may be due to many factors like recent hike in taxes, unemployement or upon certain demands from the Carlton County authorities. The writer has assumed migrants are responsible for these vandalism incidents without considering the cause which would help to determine the people responsible for it.
Secondly, police arrests in these acts of vandalism haven't been considered. Naturally in the case of vandalism some police reports or arrests may have been carried out. These reports may contain clues about the group of people involved in this act. This will help ascertain if immigrants were involved in the recent vandalism.
Additionally, the writers recommendation to curb migrants to the region may have no effect to the situation. Even if previous migrants were involved in the vandalism curbing additional migrants wouldn't have any effect. Instead it may have adverse effects to the local business and economy. To stop the vandalism different solution needs to be considered such as increased police vigilance in the region.
In conclusion the writer has neglected certain factors in the incident and the above said questions would have to considered before zeroing in on a solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nion of the citizens of Carlton County. However the writer has not considered certain p...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etermine the people responsible for it. Secondly, police arrests in these acts ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople responsible for it. Secondly, police arrests in these acts of vandalis...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...lice arrests in these acts of vandalism havent been considered. Naturally in the case ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
... recent vandalism. Additionally, the writers recommendation to curb migrants to the ...
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Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on may have no effect to the situation. Even if previous migrants were involved in the ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...e vandalism curbing additional migrants wouldnt have any effect. Instead it may have ad...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ional migrants wouldnt have any effect. Instead it may have adverse effects to the loca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 13.6137724551 15% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 28.8173652695 31% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 2260.96107784 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 441.139720559 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25590551181 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73469055965 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 204.123752495 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51968503937 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 705.55239521 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5815698716 57.8364921388 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 119.503703932 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.70786347227 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268026609812 0.218282227539 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904933386744 0.0743258471296 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108589256561 0.0701772020484 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139119346865 0.128457276422 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108796646433 0.0628817314937 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.3799401198 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 98.500998004 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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