Workers in the small town of Leeville take fewer sick days than workers in the large city of Masonton, 50 miles away. Moreover, relative to population size, the diagnosis of stress-related illness is proportionally much lower in Leeville than in Masonton. According to the Leeville Chamber of Commerce, these facts can be attributed to the health benefits of the relatively relaxed pace of life in Leeville.
The argument states that the people of Leeville take a less sick leaves compared to people of to Masonton, based on fundamentally flawed assumptions. Many factors come into play when a study of comparing two kinds of people's habits coming from two different towns is done. So, when we analyze this study we will be able to get a pristine idea about the unwarranted assumptions in the argument.
Firstly, considering the point in the statement about size and population of towns. The argument suggests that the people of town Leeville take less sick leaves just based on size and population of the town, this point highly flawed to its core. As the study carried out on the people of town Leeville are less compared to town Masonton due to the population difference. Due to which the study comes up with a flawed conclusion that people of Leeville take less sick leaves. As, if the population is less so the total sick leaves counted will be also be less compared to a town which has a huge population.
Secondly, the people taken for the study work for which kind of jobs is also not justified here. As it might be the case that people of Leeville in study, work in jobs of lower demands. Like jobs which require less technical skill. Due to which maybe their work life balance is better of compared to people of Masonton. Due to which the stress related illness is also low in Leeville as, maybe majority of workers work in low profile jobs. So, this might be reason that stress is low in Leeville. This cannot be compared to Masonton, as given it is big town compared to Leeville.Due to which stress maybe a high in people of Masonton. There may be other kind of people in the same town who have stress related issue, but they are not considered into the study. To negate this point,it can also be said that there is a high probability that other kind of people who are relaxed may be present in Masonton but are not considered in the study.
Thirdly, as Leville is a small town compared to Masonton . So it might be case that environmental conditions play a significant role on the health of people of both the towns. As earlier said , the companies or industries in Leville are sub- standard and demand less technical skills. This tells us that huge industries such as car manufacturing companies, chemical industries and many more are not present in Leville. Because generally huge companies always try to setup there companies in big towns or cities. Considering Masonton which has the above mentioned car and chemical industries due to which pollution and environmental conditions are way better in Leville compared to Masonton. As, it is known fact that people who work in these kinds of high technical skills demanding industries, which also emit virulent gas and smoke which may have deleterious effects on the health of the people of Masonton. This can explain why people of Masonton take more sick leaves and have stress related sickness compared to people of Leville.
In addition to this , there is high chance that due to exacting work culture in Masonton people who are considered in the study, also receive many sick leaves from their respective companies or industries, as the employers also know that employees require rest from there demanding work schedule. This case might be reverse for people of Leeville who are considered in the study, as maybe their employer does not give many sick leaves compared to what people of Masonton get.
Hence, comparing two such diverse towns where the way of life is totally different is not justifiable. As the facts stated in the argument lacks authenticity and proper assumptions. No proof is either stated to back the facts presented in the argument. Therefore, proper criterions must be considered to perform this kind of study.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 31 15
No. of Words: 657 350
No. of Characters: 3073 1500
No. of Different Words: 224 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.063 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.677 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.5 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 201 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 145 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 111 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.194 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.645 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.484 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.522 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.154 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.6327345309 178% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 31.0 13.6137724551 228% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 94.0 55.5748502994 169% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3148.0 2260.96107784 139% => OK
No of words: 655.0 441.139720559 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80610687023 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05894927669 4.56307096286 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58594385581 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 204.123752495 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.361832061069 0.468620217663 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 989.1 705.55239521 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 2.70958083832 406% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 19.7664670659 157% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6614109949 57.8364921388 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.548387097 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1290322581 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09677419355 5.70786347227 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.25449101796 266% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 6.88822355289 247% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174563454969 0.218282227539 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597251369679 0.0743258471296 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588520170484 0.0701772020484 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986127649031 0.128457276422 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542866179583 0.0628817314937 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.3799401198 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.32208582834 86% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 98.500998004 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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