The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer-generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household.
The best way as suggested by the statement to reduce solve the environmental problem is to limit the amount of trash accepted from each household is generally not an effective solution. I disagree with the statement as many important criteria's have been ignored here. Because there is a plethora of other factors through which environmental problems can be tackled.
The consumer generated waste ranges from plastic to organic waste which varies from person to person depending on the eating habits and various other factors.But majorly in current world, most of the products for example tinned food, mobile phones, coke bottles are made from plastics or glass which are not biodegradable. So, even if a consumer tries to buy some stuff which is environmentally friendly like food etc. They are come in plastic containers or tins. Therefore, if the municipal corporations plan to limit the amount of trash that will be accepted from each household, does not quite solve the issue.
These industries which produce for example food, smartphones, earphones, canned food etc. should be monitored and encouraged to produce containers or plastic bags which are biodegradable. Plastic bags play a very major role for the health of environment. If a shop has almost 200 customers in a day and every time a customer buys something from the shop, they get a plastic bag to keep the stuff which they bought. So, for each customer consider 1 or 2 plastic bags per shopping. This makes a total of 400 plastic bags from a single shop per day. Scientist say that for a single plastic bag to decay into environment it takes almost 100 years.Then just imagine the number os plastic bags thrown into garbage around the world. So, the industries must take responsibility by relying on biodegradable materials to pack their products or provide an alternative solution to plastic bags.
To reduce consumer waste, the governing body can pass a law stating that the individuals who shop on regular basis, can only buy products which are wrapped with non-biodegradable products for 15 times a month. For this law to become successful the governing body should also impose strict laws on the industries who produce these non-biodegradable products at a humongous scale. Eventually, then we can see the reduction of consumer waste. Recycling of these waste plastic or non-biodegradable products should be done in order to reduce the number of productions of new non degradable products. Through which an overall decrement of these harmful products is possible.
Hence, to solve environment crisis the way suggested by the statement is not effective. It will only cause more chaos among the individuals. So, there are plethora of other ways through which this problem can be taken care of. These initiatives must be considered by every individual, not only governing bodies.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rtant criterias have been ignored here. Because there is a plethora of other factors th...
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Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... environmental problems can be tackled. The consumer generated waste ranges from...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...eating habits and various other factors.But majorly in current world, most of the p...
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Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'saith', 'says'.
Suggestion: saith; says
...s from a single shop per day. Scientist say that for a single plastic bag to decay ...
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Line 5, column 645, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...o environment it takes almost 100 years.Then just imagine the number os plastic bags...
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Line 5, column 885, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n alternative solution to plastic bags. To reduce consumer waste, the governing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2394.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13733905579 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93018030835 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515021459227 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.3225868076 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256773769161 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716446694753 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923637988041 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158362923269 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982638005702 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rtant criterias have been ignored here. Because there is a plethora of other factors th...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... environmental problems can be tackled. The consumer generated waste ranges from...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...eating habits and various other factors.But majorly in current world, most of the p...
^^^
Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'saith', 'says'.
Suggestion: saith; says
...s from a single shop per day. Scientist say that for a single plastic bag to decay ...
^^^
Line 5, column 645, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...o environment it takes almost 100 years.Then just imagine the number os plastic bags...
^^^^
Line 5, column 885, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n alternative solution to plastic bags. To reduce consumer waste, the governing ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2394.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13733905579 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93018030835 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515021459227 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.3225868076 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256773769161 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716446694753 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923637988041 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158362923269 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982638005702 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.