Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and
explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
It is concluded that Palean baskets are not unique to the ancient village of Palea because they have also been found in another ancient village called Lithos. The fact that Lithos is located across the deep and broad Brim river while no boats have been found near Palea is presented as the . This conclusion cannot be drawn from the presented data unless following evidences are provided:
First, it should be presented that the Brim river have had the same depth and width at the time. Many rivers undergo changes in depth and width through the years. For example, maybe the water was so shallow that people could walk or easily swim at the time. Also, it is possible that the width of the river was not so broad and therefore it was possible to swim from one side to the other. In any of these instances, the argument is flawed.
Second, even if the river was in fact, as broad and deep as it it now, evidence should be presented to show that if Paleans were not able to make simple wooden bridges that were later destroyed through the years. Maybe people of villages across the river cut long trees and used them to pass the river. Maybe they used rope and wood to make simple bridges. If any of these is true, the argument does not hold water.
Third, evidence is needed to show that no major flood has happened in the area through these years. A flood is able to change the historical site to a great extent. For instance, what if boats were built and used in Palea but were later destroyed and gone with the flood? Or the flood itself, moved the basket from an area to the other. In any of these circumstances, the conclusion cannot be drawn.
After all is said and done, the current argument, without any additional data and evidences, is exttremely flawed. However, if requested evidences regarding the conditions of the Brim river at the time, abilities of villagers to make bridges ,and absense of major floods through the years are presented, a valid evaluation of the argument is possible.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 359 350
No. of Characters: 1600 1500
No. of Different Words: 164 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.353 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.457 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.156 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.895 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.723 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.632 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.531 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e been found near Palea is presented as the . This conclusion cannot be drawn from th...
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...een found near Palea is presented as the . This conclusion cannot be drawn from th...
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... following evidences are provided: First, it should be presented that the B...
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...instances, the argument is flawed. Second, even if the river was in fact, a...
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...river was in fact, as broad and deep as it it now, evidence should be presented to sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, third, while, after all, for example, for instance, in fact, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 2260.96107784 74% => OK
No of words: 359.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6295264624 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24913563644 2.78398813304 81% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 204.123752495 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479108635097 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1498216305 57.8364921388 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 119.503703932 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.70786347227 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123273227606 0.218282227539 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361244676922 0.0743258471296 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598982683169 0.0701772020484 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729329429141 0.128457276422 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727670423197 0.0628817314937 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.3550499002 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.197005988 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.5979740519 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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