1.Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The argument claims that the next franchise of Nature’s Way,a popular store selling health related products will prove to be successful in Plainsville,an area where most people prefer living a healthy lifestyle.The argument has based this claim on the current trend of following an exercise regime prevalent in residents of Plainsville,but it has erringly conceived that following an exercise regime consequently mandates that the residents of Plainsville will have to eat only healthy food.
As Plainsville residents are already following a healthy lifestyle by involving themselves in various k...
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Sentence: Hence even if Nature's way store in other areas have proved successful, the plan could very founder in Plainsville, if residents there maintain their trust and proclivity on exercising rather than eating health products of Nature's way.
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