In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
While any discussion does not require to be full of dissent and staringly contrasting ideas, for a progressive and fruitful conclave it is always advisable to have healthy discourse in which diverging ideas can flow and it is very much required as long as it sticks in the line with the aim of creating something worthy . Just like no two stars in the sky are similar , Similarly every people will also be different ans when combined together in the right mix with clear intentions help to develop a cabal just as astonishing and vibrant as a clear night sky.
While some might say that too much divergent view points in a discussion serves to stifle any progressive out come, they ignore the very underlying assumptions of discussion. Implicitly need of discussion in any issue arises due to the fact that a solid solution with a conformity is absent and various view points are required to deliberate and coalesce that into something Uniform. We may call it the essence. To furthur support my stand I would like to state that the very Democracy lies on the principle of respecting each and every person and their views as equal and giving voice to every body . For this very prupose we have parliaments where both ruling party and the opposition sits represneting the whole country. Its functionning and the discussions which takes place seves my point in which the whole issue of the country is discussed and hardly any discussion is with out dis aggreements.
Again to emphasize my point on bigger scale I would like to present the case of India. We call it unity in diversity. The very fact that it has so many religions, caste, creeds and languages along with different political facets that invokes the unity in diversity . The very balancing act of various opposing principles, ideas , viewpoints along with a common agenda helps in having a sustained progress where any force does not become so great as to become overbearing and thus harming in a longer run. A fully genial discussion can also lead to a sense of complacency or the felling of all is well with the out the unrest for acheiving even greater success or canstant finding and creation new tenets.
If we look at the great era of 19th century which produced many great scientist and indusrtial revolution, It was not because of a series of developments based on chance, rather the development was marked by the controversial theories, developments which helped and spurred every body to constantly finding for the best as their was always some to challenge what happend before thus creating a healthy atmosphere of cration, along with some setbacks to balnace the few glitches.
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Sentence: A fully genial discussion can also lead to a sense of complacency or the felling of all is well with the out the unrest for acheiving even greater success or canstant finding and creation new tenets.
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Sentence: If we look at the great era of 19th century which produced many great scientist and indusrtial revolution, It was not because of a series of developments based on chance, rather the development was marked by the controversial theories, developments which helped and spurred every body to constantly finding for the best as their was always some to challenge what happend before thus creating a healthy atmosphere of cration, along with some setbacks to balnace the few glitches.
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Sentence: While any discussion does not require to be full of dissent and staringly contrasting ideas, for a progressive and fruitful conclave it is always advisable to have healthy discourse in which diverging ideas can flow and it is very much required as long as it sticks in the line with the aim of creating something worthy .
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Sentence: Just like no two stars in the sky are similar , Similarly every people will also be different ans when combined together in the right mix with clear intentions help to develop a cabal just as astonishing and vibrant as a clear night sky.
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Sentence: To furthur support my stand I would like to state that the very Democracy lies on the principle of respecting each and every person and their views as equal and giving voice to every body .
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Sentence: For this very prupose we have parliaments where both ruling party and the opposition sits represneting the whole country.
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Sentence: Its functionning and the discussions which takes place seves my point in which the whole issue of the country is discussed and hardly any discussion is with out dis aggreements.
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Sentence: A fully genial discussion can also lead to a sense of complacency or the felling of all is well with the out the unrest for acheiving even greater success or canstant finding and creation new tenets.
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Sentence: If we look at the great era of 19th century which produced many great scientist and indusrtial revolution, It was not because of a series of developments based on chance, rather the development was marked by the controversial theories, developments which helped and spurred every body to constantly finding for the best as their was always some to challenge what happend before thus creating a healthy atmosphere of cration, along with some setbacks to balnace the few glitches.
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