The availability of spurious drugs and medicines has always been a problem in this state. Following an alarming rise in trafficking in the state, the govt has ordered an increase in the number of the check points on the state border and in the number of personnel manning them , to apprehend traffickers. The govt would do well to provide them with arms as well.
Write an essay in which you consider what questions would need to be answered so as to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Also to explain how the answers to these questions would help analyze the prediction.
The author cites the condition that prevails in the state regarding the spurious drugs and medicines. In order to decrease the availability of these drugs , the government taken certain measures. It ordered to increase the number of checkpoints on the state borders, and even increase the number of personnel to apprehend the traffickers. The author predicts that the personnel should be provided with the artillery to have a better outcome. The prediction is not appropriate because there are various other methods other than providing arms to the personnel.
Firstly, the author states that the...
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certain conditions should accompanied with the artillery provision.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to should and accompanied
Sentence: Thus , to sum it up, the government should take appropriate measures to decrease the availability of spurious drugs such as appointing honest and efficient personnel . the other measures which the govt ordered can be successful if they are implemented in a proper way . certain conditions should accompanied with the artillery provision.
Error: govt Suggestion: government
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.5 4.7
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