Claim: The emergence of the online "blogosphere" has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United Stated.
Reason: When anyone can publish political opinions easily, standards for covering news and political topics will inevitably decline.
In the age of advanced technology, people have found new ways to express themselves through updating their statuses and blogging; sharing their feelings and opinions not with only to their friends but also other online participants. The emergence of "blogoshere" has put many controversial political aspects on public display; allowing the public to freely discuss and opine their thoughts.
The way modern news outlets have changed over the past decade due to the increase of blogging and vlogging (self-broadcasting videos). People anywhere in the world can share their feelings and opinions of ...
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Sentence: These self-broadcasting websites have not hindered the quality of political discousre in the United State, but it has heightened the exposure of what is going on behind closed doors for public knowledge.
Error: discousre Suggestion: discourse
Sentence: They have the right to freedom of speech and express themselves in an interllectual way.
Error: interllectual Suggestion: intellectual
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.031 0.07
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 345 350
No. of Characters: 1793 1500
No. of Different Words: 190 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.31 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.197 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.787 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.833 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.389 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.284 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.031 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5