“Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.”
An educational institution is the foreground from where a student commences his journey towards knowledge and learning. During this course, he goes on from being raw to being refined. Diverse subjects to study, eclectic view-points to inculcate, inter-personal skills to develop and certain special talents to hone and highlight – such are the arenas he gets to venture into as a student. Thus, an educational institution plays a very significant role in shaping up a student’s future; this brings along the responsibility that rests on their shoulders to forestall and, thereby, dissuade student...
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Score: 6.0 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 468 350
No. of Characters: 2248 1500
No. of Different Words: 241 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.651 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.803 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.842 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 167 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 137 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.43 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.476 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.524 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.124 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5