"The following appeared in the annual report from the president of the National Brush Company. - "In order to save money, we at the National Brush Company have decided to pay our employees for each brush they produce instead of for the time they spend producing brushes. We believe that this policy will lead to the production of more and better brushes, will allow us to reduce our staff size, and will enable the company factories to operate for fewer hours — resulting in savings on electricity and security costs. These changes will ensure that the best workers keep their jobs and that the company will earn a profit in the coming year."
Discuss how well reasoned you find the above argument.
The argument stated here has a few basic faulty assumptions that call its logic into question.
Firstly, the president of the National Brush Company assumes that by prioritizing the number of brushes produced by each worker, the quality of the products will not be affected. As a result of not compensating the workers based on the amount of time they put into the products, it might so happen that the workers become busy with churning out as many brushes they can in a fixed time period, with no thought to the quality of the item they're producing. The number of items produced might assume a...
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