GRE Issue 80Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.

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GRE Issue 80
Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.

Education is a special industry different from other commercial ones, and teachers' job is not merely confined in gaining profits like others' work. This makes the evaluation about how much money a teacher deserves a little different and somehow complex. After all, the salary issue should be based on the teachers’ performance in teaching, and this performance may be related to many factors. The speaker considers that teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance. I concede the point is right to some extent. However, other necessary factors and standards should al...

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