"if rituals did not exist, we would have to invent them. We need ceremonies and rituals to help us dfine ourselves socially and culturally."
Human beings are social animals and they follow different rituals according to their religions,regions or their ancestors. According to the given statement rituals need to be invented if they do not exist. Rituals have been invented from earlier times, We do follow those rituals according to our customs. Ceremonies and rituals are the part of human life they bring felicity to our lives. Ceremonies can be of variant types like wedding ceremony, birthday, retirement ceremony and many more. Rituals reflect our cultures and bring glories.
Rituals have been invented from generations, credit goes to our ancestors. Which helps us to understand moral values and their needs to survive in day to day life. Every religion has their own rituals and follow them in their own way. The ritual world of Hinduism, manifestations of which differ greatly among regions, villages, and individuals, offers a number of common features that link all Hindus into a greater Indian religious system. Domestic worship is also among one of the important ritual in Hinduism, They worship cow and snake and also celebrate festivals such as govardhan puja and nagpancami. Similarly in Muslims eid is celebrated.
Furthermore, For orthodox Hindus, dawn and dusk are greeted with recitation from the Rig Veda of the Gayatri Mantra for the sun for many people, the only Sanskrit prayer they know. After a bath, there is personal worship of the gods at a family shrine, which typically includes lighting a lamp and offering foodstuffs before the images, while prayers in Sanskrit or a regional language are recited. In the evenings, especially in rural areas, mostly female devotees may gather together for long sessions of singing hymns in praise of one or more of the gods.
Next, Christians celebrate Christmas, Hindus have different festivals such as Diwali, holy, Raksha-Bandhan. These are among the main festivals by all of them. However these rituals brings enjoyment and fun to our lives, But also this causes differences in different religions and causes ramification among them. It also leads to riots in several communities. Let's illustrate it further, Taking an example of Ganesh chaturthi different people causes violence and riots.
Ceremonies are arranged in which people gather and ameliorate. Ceremonies such as valentine's day is celebrated which is good at one point and also has some negative effects. When it causes violence by different communities due to their protest against it. Ceremonies gives fun and enjoyment, But it also waste our time and money in attending them.
Finally, To wrap up,Ceremonies and rituals are important part of our lives and also helps to define us socially and culturally. As it teaches us different manners and rules to live our life by following them.
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Sentence: However these rituals brings enjoyment and fun to our lives, But also this causes differences in different religions and causes ramification among them.
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Sentence: Ceremonies gives fun and enjoyment, But it also waste our time and money in attending them.
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The essay is out of topic. You need to argue 'if rituals did not exist, we would have to invent them or not invent them'.
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