Issue Topic: The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.

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Issue Topic: The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.

A famous old adage says “think positive and be optimistic”. Perhaps the author too here is asserting the same by favouring the idea to praise positive actions and ignore the negative ones. However, I agree to the authors stand for the former part but disagree with his stand for the latter part. Instead, it should be a blend of few things which is mentioned at the end.

It is always salubrious to praise positive actions. A word of praise for a particular deed goads the child to voluntarily perform more of such actions. With such comments, an atmosphere of positive energy will develop arou...

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Sentence: Perhaps the author too here is asserting the same by favouring the idea to praise positive actions and ignore the negative ones.
Description: The fragment too here is is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace here with adjective

Sentence: It our perception which decides of the either sides.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to It and our
Description: The fragment the either sides is rare

Sentence: Neverthless, the former is recommended over the latter, one has to explain that the latter is a form of malparactice or cheating.
Error: malparactice Suggestion: malpractice

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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.464 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.809 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.265 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.46 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.123 0.07
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