"A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college." - Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the posi

What differentiates a brilliant teacher from an average teacher is the former's ability to take into consideration his/ her students' unique traits, strengths, and weaknesses. No two students are the same, because no two humans, even identical twins, are the same in every facet. In order to ensure that students are attaining the best possible education, the system must be flexible enough to reflect today's diverse youth population. Thus, if a nation requires that all of its students study a uniform national curriculum from K-12, not only would such a policy stifle students' growth, but it woul...

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