Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
In the above argument, the speaker asserts that natural areas should be kept from exploiting, although those areas could be reconstructed for economic profit. Indeed, we should pay more attention to protect the natural resource on earth because of rapid decreasing wilderness. While I contend that we, of course, should respect environment and put our effort on preserving natural resources that the earth give us, I cannot agree that Nation should set up the laws that every remaining wilderness place should be preserved even if there will be a economic gain for local people who need economic inc...
Sentence: While I contend that we, of course, should respect environment and put our effort on preserving natural resources that the earth give us, I cannot agree that Nation should set up the laws that every remaining wilderness place should be preserved even if there will be a economic gain for local people who need economic increase in an emergency.
Description: The fragment earth give us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense
Sentence: Admittedly, surviving wilderness areas should be protected as long as possible because of their value to people's life: they influence the air we breath, the water we drink, the condition we live in.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to we and breath
Sentence: One apprehensible example is that in a serious droughty village, local people want to get the funding to build a water reservoir which needs a large open space.
Error: droughty Suggestion: drought
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No. of Different Words: 245 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.789 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.129 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.718 2.4
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.355 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.179 0.07
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