Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Nations should pass laws to preserve wilderness areas. These wilderness areas are very productive and useful as they contain enormous natural resources. So these should be protected so that no one can harm them and their originality will remain as it is.
For example an area where plenty of oil ores are available should be protected. Entry of vehicles should be prohibited there. Laws should be made to prevent excessive of oil exploration from the ores. Limits should be decided on quantity of exploration of oil. Laws should be made on deciding factors like interruption of private agencies, establishment of purifying plant etc.
Places where natural resources are available can be developed for economic gain, but should be developed only up to that extent which should not harm its natural state. So many technological developments can be done at the wilderness areas.
For example, if near the uranium ores nuclear power plants are made , this will be convenient and more economical. As cost of transportation of raw material, uranium safe packaging will be saved, there are so many advantages of constructing power plant near the uranium ores.
But other factors are also important; nuclear waste can damage the naturality of the wilderness areas and can cause their degradation. So proper laws should be made by government to protect wilderness areas.
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Sentence: So these should be protected so that no one can harm them and their originality will remain as it is.
Description: The word harm is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to harm
Sentence: Places where natural resources are available can be developed for economic gain, but should be developed only up to that extent which should not harm its natural state.
Description: The word harm is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to harm
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