As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
I agree with the statement given by the author. Here, the author has made a claim that as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. People should not misuse technology in solving very simple and common problems because that might reduce the person’s aptitude for solving problems.
Here we can take an example of a calculator. A calculator is one of the examples of technology which helps in calculation of mathematical problems. It can solve small problems and sometimes bigger problems as well, with the ad...
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Sentence: If a person starts using calculator in his/her childhood he or she might loos the aptitude for solving mathematical problems.
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Sentence: They can use readymade notes available on websites.
Error: readymade Suggestion: read made
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.828 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.808 7.5
Seems you have these flaws in other essays.
'Avg. Sentence Length is low' means you need to write more compound or complex sentences.
'Sentence Length SD is low' means that your essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length.
you may use less 'But' in sentences.
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 29 15
No. of Words: 401 350
No. of Characters: 1976 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.475 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.928 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.805 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 111 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.828 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.808 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.345 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.283 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.451 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5