As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
These days, thank to development technology many people can share their information with each other and keep themselves up to date while in the past, they could not take advantages of getting information about different kinds of majors. Technology provides them with golden opportunity to solve their problems 10 times as fast as when they solved them in the past.
People spend most of their time with struggling with different kinds of tools that are based on new technology which forces them to learn technology literacy at an early age. For example, one of the main inventions of human beings is computer and mobile phone and many people even who live in under developing countries use them. Children have to learn computer literacy and work with computers and mobile phone to do their home work and find creative ways to solve their problems. Working with computers at an early age helps them to be a creative person and write computer programs to find a better solution for their mathematical problems.
Some people could be a great entrepreneurship by using advanced technology. Some people like Bill Gates could make revolution at computer industry and increase the awareness of people from all over the world about using computers by writing different computer programs that are user friendly and attempt people to use computer as an advanced technology. In addition, other creative researchers could reap the benefit of this technology and solve some difficult mathematical problems that were very time consuming if they wanted to solve them by themselves.
Advent of internet contributes researchers to communicate with each other in all over the world and share their knowledge which would never happen if they did not have this technology. The most proportion of difficult problems in different majors like mathematics and medicine are solved in short time and increase the rate of treatments of dangerous diseases like heart attack and diabetics problems. At astronomy by using technology, researchers and experts could develop their findings and increase their information about the galaxy and space and try to find new planets in the world and share their knowledge with people and make them satisfy about their findings. Without technology, researchers and philosophers could not discover new aspects of different majors and could not find reasonable solutions to tackle the difficult problems. It is clear that technology makes contribution to reinforce the ability of people to think at a creative way at short time.
Although some people think that using wide variety of tools that are invented due to advent of technology like computers, lab tops and smart phones cause to increasing several problems like obesity and being lazy, the advantages of technology outweigh the disadvantages and strong evidence about improving at Scientists levels prove this advantages which cannot be ignored easily.
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