as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

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as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

the author's claim that the ever increasing use of technology to solve problems will surely lead to the deterioration of human ability to think is however true to some extent, too prejudiced. use of technology speeds up the process thus saving one's time.

while it is true that people nowadays are tempted to use calculators instead of using their brain cells every time a calculation pops up in front of them,using technology to get the job done brings some sort of mental relief keeping in mind the amount of stress levels people have nowadays.

people use some form of technology to clear off his mundane activities. in that way they can invest their saved time on some creative and recreational activities. Considering the life of a house wife living in village, her day mostly goes by completing all the household stuff, leaving her with very little time for herself.

technology also removes the bondage like distance, time and resources through seamless connectivity between individuals or parties, thus allowing more extensive exchange of information. one can become more resourceful, knowledgable through technology. now whenever steve jobs launches yet another enigmatic apple product, the whole world can see it. an indian sitting in minnesota cannot know what is happening in his country without the help of technology.

in all, while the over reliance on technology is no doubt deteorating the human mind, one needs technology to survive, enjoy and to succeed in these times.

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