As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate..

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate..

The development of technology makes people worry that the thinking ability of people will deteriorate. However, from my perspective, the technology will help people to solve the more complex problems, and people will be more powerful with technology in the future.

First of all, technology, such as telephone, newspaper, e-books, will make people get information easily. For example, through telephones, people can communicate with others conveniently, and change their ideas to get progress together. The newspaper can spread information so quickly and told people what is happening around the wo...

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