"The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."

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"The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."

Starting from the Stone Age, the man has always found different ways of making his life comfortable. There have been many discoveries in the past which has helped man to live a much more comfortable life as compared to the life led by his forefathers. Today, the man has become more efficient with the assistance of technology. It is true that the primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people’s efficiency but providing leisure time cannot be compared with the technological advancement or efficiency of man.

The advent of technology has led to the improvement of many ...

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