A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood. Moreover, the majority of families in Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. Therefore, the new Captain Seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should be quite popular and profitable.
The new Captain Seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should be quite popular and profitable. it assumption is base on recent study of consumption of seafood dishes in such argument has lot of flaws and may of unwarranted assumption include. in such argument rife with holes and fabulist believe thus it not indicate seafood restaurants popular and profitable.
A recent study sales indicate that consumption of seafood dishes bay city restaurant increase by 30 percentage. it completely vauge indication of percentage increase. the sales study take particular area where people enjoy more sea food. there is also possible in before sales of seafood has been increase because of in this year lot of fish get it from sea. so dish price of seafood has decline. last five years not to much fish available in sea but this time get seafood more from sea.
There is no currently operating restaurant in city who specialty in sea. this one of foolish assumption by caption. it not possible that in city bay only one seafood famous restaurant. it clearly show over confidences of caption of restaurant. there might me two or three restaurant. but due to revamp or renew action works going on in that restaurant so it might be close for two to three months. there also possible that sales survey take of small they of hotel not big restaurant so caption assume there restaurant popular in city bay. due to works in another hotels more people come into captions hotel. people has no other choice it help to increase sales. it not like it's restaurant popular.
Biggest flaw is the majority of families in Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown. it hole unwarranted assumption. survey take in few are in city where people have two income family. there is also large number of people who has one way income. the survey is not say when it take it also take long back before. survey also shows . such families eat significantly fewer home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. this also foolish thing. decade ago it not state how much or many family eat out side food. the family concern about health one biggest flaws in this argument if family concern about health then they cook in home and eat. they never go any restaurant. unless survey id fully repersentive valid and reliable, it can not say caption restaurant is popular and profitable.
Finally there is enormous flaw in passage and not valid assumption. so caption has to think all above point consideration. it restaurant is really popular in city or it fluk factor. so need more information to warrant caption popular and profitable.
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