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So long as they are aware of the dangers involved, adults should not be legally bound to use seat belts.
The world has seen millions of car accidents till date and would continue to do so unless some quixotic solution is discovered. Considering the gravity and the graveness of the situation I would prefer that the law is enforced for every individual to use seat belts, irrespective of how much aware the concerned person is regarding road accidents.
First and foremost, in every walk of our life, safety should come first. While driving a car, one of the precautions to be taken is to fasten the seat belt. Alongside this precaution there are many other like not speaking on mobile while driving, no...
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Sentence: Alongside this precaution there are many other like not speaking on mobile while driving, not to drive if one is under the influence of alcohol and many more.These set of instructions or precautions need to be enforced at all cost whosoever be the person in control of the vehicle.
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Sentence: He might be corect to some extent, but the gamut is limited to only those disciplined individuals who realise how pertinent it is to wear a seat belt howsoever an exper one is in managing a car.
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