In this contemporary World, life is so fast and competitive. Everyone is busy to settle their lives in an easy mode. A another face of life, We all are depend on the scientific inventions like Car, computer,electricity and so on.
In today's era, when we apply for a job in a company, we apply for it online and they process our documentation online. if our documents are attractive for them, then they will consider us. so in a way our documents create first impression on them. So we can say that, in this contemporary world creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image. As it is clear by the above example, because in this case, if our documents are not good enough then there is no chance to get a job on the basis of one's ability.
As an example, if a scientist has a caliber, and ability to do research, but his/her ability always judge by his/her publications. if his project is working then he known as a good scientist, otherwise nobody will consider him. So to prove his intelligence he should have good publications.
If a person is talented and good enough in his profession, then first he should create an appealing image in front of others, because without showing the talent,how can others come to know about one's talent.
This era is a competitive world, if you do not know to represent yourself in front of this world, then others can snatch that chance from you. So to live in this contemporary era, one should know to present himself in front of world. so that others can consider you.
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A another face of life, We all are depend on the scientific ...
Another face of life, We all depend on the scientific ...
Sentence: As an example, if a scientist has a caliber, and ability to do research, but his/her ability always judge by his/her publications. if his project is working then he known as a good scientist, otherwise nobody will consider him.
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Suggestion: Refer to he and known
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