1. The emergence of the online “blogosphere” and social media has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United States. Reason: When anyone can publish political opinions easily, standards for covering news and political topics will inevitably decline.
Write a response in which you examine your own position on the statement. Explore the extent to which you either agree or disagree with it, and support your reasoning with evidence and/or examples. Be sure to reflect on ways in which the statement might or might not be true, and how this informs your thinking on the subject.
Blogging became a new fashion in the social media platforms. Anyone irrespective of their knowledge, education and identity can create blogs and post news online. This declined the quality of news published and standards of news covered gradually in the society. In the digital platforms, the post which is published can’ t be true checked every single time. This acts as weapon for fraud news and rumors to spread over society. People can’t realize that the news is really not true. Recently, a boy posted an article of a scam being done by their college management during examinations. He posted that the college management is scamming students and sold their question papers. This broke a riot among the student union and protested against this. As this became a huge issue the national regulation committee thoroughly checked the institution’s internal activities and announced it’s clear. Then, the student union apologized for their misleading activities due to a fake post and suspended it. Similar political incidents shook the world in history.
A political party may mislead the public by faking the posts in media leading unfair elections. This blogosphere overtook the news channels popularity and their verified news policies. News channels often verify the news that is being reported with live coverage and with proofs found by reporters on the other hand the bloggers simply write their own views as public news without any proper investigation. Many people even fake their identities and post fake news to mislead society. This provokes religious riots which imbalances a country. Recently, a person tweeted a false accusation on the government about killing wild animals and selling them anonymously. This is protested by animal activists and became a national issue. People lost trust on the government. However, many people argue that blogs are really useful to express their personal views about the political scenarios in the country and many dark sides of the politics. But they should be disclaimed as their personal views instead of being news. So, the standards and the policies of covering news and topics is reduced by the blogosphere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... incidents shook the world in history. A political party may mislead the public...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26801152738 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66916046913 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567723342939 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1829935155 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4782608696 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0869565217 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52173913043 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169679645209 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524224891726 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536592607002 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138200997763 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128219183538 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.