The given claim stated that city is served as the primary generator and preserver of cultural traditions for a nation. I think it is not necessarily true under all the circumstances where the culture and traditions could evolve. Therefore, I can only partially agree with the author.
First of all, we have to consider a question: how the culture and traditions are invented at the first place? In my view, I think the key part of the answer should be the people, though we cannot assert the absolute answer to this abstract problem. Then, it naturally comes to the city as a pivotal component to support people gathering together in order to create a social patter, which could be called culture or tradition. We could see numerous examples of historical cities which reserved the precious part of the culture of a nation, take London for example, the Big Ben as well as the parliament building in Westminster is the prominent symbol for the ancient city which witnessed thousands of years history from Victorian to the second world war. Even when a civil war destroyed the cathedrals, there buildings are still under proper protection. Nevertheless, it is reasonable to view city as a good place for culture symbol.
However, if we go back to the point of the previous question, it is clearly the fact not all the people live in the city no matter which era they are makes it not coherence to ignore rural places also play an important part in presenting the culture of a nation. In fact, there were more people settled in the countryside or sporadic towns than metropolitan cities in history. It is only because the industrialization and globalization that more and more people crowed in cities. Small English town like Windsor where the Royal Family used to live, rustic cottage where the author of Jean Austin stayed are both unavoidable part of English culture.
Actually, the way of society group the people together is crucial to where the culture develops. As the examples show above, there are rural English way of lifestyle as well as city lifestyle, how can we brutally decide which way of life can generate cultural traditions? This is why city is only one possible place where the culture of a nation thrives.
To conclude, the evolution and preservation of cultural traditions varies according to the characteristics of the lifestyle of the people, it is not precise to value city as the paramount part of it. Therefore, I could only agree with the author partly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, i think, in fact, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87971698113 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74453626458 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514150943396 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3952047655 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.944444444 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.21951772744 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277605838766 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921813874359 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892222552397 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178609274932 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725502805746 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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