How can someone decide the greatness of a person? It will be unjust to say the people who live with them will decide the greatness of the person and people who live after them will be able to decide more accurately the greatness of a person. The achievement of the person can be depends of place to place and time to time, it can change. It will be not wise to say that the greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by people who live with them.
Human many people achieve various things in the past but not accepted by their contemporaries because it is against the belief of old theory, held belief, religion, and not much has proof. For example the theory of evolution the people of their contemporaries was not accepted it because it compare people with apps but after the certain time due to research and matching of geans people started to believe that theory. As well as the capricious theory of earth revolves around the sun also not accepted and against the church after their contemporaries this theory proven true and held great importance in human history. So, it not that the greatness of individual rightly be analysed by the present but in future it can become important.
It is not compulsory that person can become famous in the future in the present also some people adored and, achieve great worth and fame. For example the musicians and painters produces great peaces and become famous in their contemporaries for great pieces like monalisa painting, monartz and beetoven, etc. and at present also they are known for their wonderful work and contribution. The athletes, such as Sachin Tendulkar known as god of cricketer known for their great contribution and achievement in cricket world leave a great milestone and become inspiration for others.
The worth of an individual changed from time to time and person to person depending on their held belief. Like the freedom fighter that died at the time of fighting for the freedom of the country, their greatness can be calculate more accurately by their contemporaries because they are the people who understand the pain and ill effect of being under foreign rule, not the present. People born after freedom probably not able to understand the situation more accurately, because they are not dealing with the situation being under rule.
In conclusion, it is not accurate to say the greatness of the person can be decided by the people who live after them but there are numerous instances as mentioned above the greatness of the person being decided also by their contemporaries. The greatness of person can be achieved in their life time also. Therefore, the achievements have been given by both their contemporaries and also the people who live after them.
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The big issue is:
The big issue is:
No of words: 474 while Unique words: 186
it means it has a lot of duplicated content
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'compares'?
Suggestion: compares
...poraries was not accepted it because it compare people with apps but after the certain ...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tone and become inspiration for others. The worth of an individual changed from ...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...ness of person can be achieved in their life time also. Therefore, the achievements have ...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...rson can be achieved in their life time also. Therefore, the achievements have been ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236686390533 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.14201183432 0.157235817809 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.069033530572 0.0880659088768 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0631163708087 0.0497285424764 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0611439842209 0.0444667217837 138% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.155818540434 0.12292977631 127% => OK
Participles: 0.0414201183432 0.0406280797675 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62727271355 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0216962524655 0.030933414821 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.094674556213 0.0997080785238 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025641025641 0.0249443105267 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0177514792899 0.0148568991511 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2769.0 2732.02544248 101% => OK
No of words: 474.0 452.878318584 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8417721519 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331223628692 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23417721519 0.280924506359 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147679324895 0.200843997647 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10970464135 0.132149295362 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62727271355 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.392405063291 0.48968727796 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.5874994506 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.3333333333 23.380412469 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7937629199 59.4972553346 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.833333333 141.124799967 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 23.380412469 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 49.7510548523 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.62962962963 1.64882698954 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48710831654 0.391690518653 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.220974486327 0.123202303941 179% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100383501549 0.077325440228 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.669084204911 0.547984918172 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12263524106 0.149214159877 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223981740416 0.161403998019 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167926755586 0.0892212321368 188% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.399591249418 0.385218514788 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0911998085949 0.0692045440612 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346721791147 0.275328986314 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16807480371 0.0653680567796 257% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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