The author in the statement argues that it is no longer possible to respect or regard any living person as a hero because of intensive media coverage. Although some people believe that due to expansion of media coverage, it is no longer possible to respect a hero, other believes that it is pragmatic for the people in a society to regard a hero. I disagree with the author. As in today’s fast developing and technical world, a social media source is very common which includes mobile phones, laptops, emails. sms services, facebook, etc. People are engage in them daily. Social media is a source from which we get timely updates and we read them.
Firstly, hero is not only who we see in bollywood or hollywood but hero also who save lives of others and make world records. In today’s world , generally all people possess at least one mobile phone. Also. due to cheap internet availability, most people are engage in watching movie series and serials, etc. For example , recent renown series is netflix series, people watch them through social media services available to them, discus about protagonist or hero , and discuss some interesting parts of the movie. Is it regard of hero or disregard? Obviously, we are regarding a living person as a hero.
Secondly, hero also who save lives of others. Many persons are considered as a hero who save lives of ther people , irrespective of his life. For example, terror attack was launched by Pakistan in Mumbai city of India , who took lives of many local people and police inspectors, police assistants. Due to their perseverance they have been regarded as hero. And every year , with help of social media, people watch horrifying attack on U tube, facebook, share their repect to heroes via different social media services available to them cause promotion of news and ultimately regard of a hero.
Moreover, hero is also who make world record or any adventurous record by tackling serious obstacles coming in front of him/her. For example, Arunima sinha who was the first women amputee who climb Mount everest instead of disability in her leg due to accident. People of a society watch, hear, read, communicate among them about courageous bravery by a girl and consider and regard as a hero to him/ her.
In conclusion, a social media is a source through which we get daily news updates of happening scenarios around us and new discovery of a hero. We watch, read there heroic bravery through different variety of social media sources available to us like facebook, whatsapp, emails, newspaper, news channels,etc. Moreover, due to cheapness of internet sources , we can able to watch TV series such as netflix series and many more, which causes hype of protagonist in a movie and ultimately, regard to a hero.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2307.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 468.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92948717949 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6370419086 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497863247863 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.3613539904 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224905437653 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744208000785 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665299467617 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137809088792 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799509577078 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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