"In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished."
In general, I agree with the assertion that the intensive media scrutiny eventually diminishes the reputation of the person who is regarded as a hero by the society. Today, in every field, there is a large amount of competition. People can do anything for getting success and to elevate their status in society. Once they get success, they are considered as a hero by the public. For that, they follow either easier way or right way.
The chief reason why I agree with the statement is that media always try to find negative values of the public figure either heroic or not.
Once they find out any point that defames the person's reputation, they make it widespread through different communication media like television, radio, etcetera. This causes the reputation of that person diminished. And once the reputation is slandered, then it is forever tarnished even though the person is vindicated from the cause. The latest example is Lance Armstrong, cycling legend. Once people discovered that he was taking drugs then it causes severe criticism in society. So, once his reputation is tarnished, he would not restore his reputation even if he would be vindicated from blame.
The second reason is that the media is a price-seeking entity. It always makes sure to increase its profit. For that, they can go over any extent. Moreover, they always try to create controversy between people. Sometimes, people take the support of media by giving money either for not to reveal the incident that defames them or to defame their competitors. And the media also helps them for doing so. So, they publish wrong information instead of the original one. This causes criticism in society. So, it is no longer possible for society to regard any man or woman as a hero.
However, there are certain heroes who are heroes in real life. They have chosen the right way of getting that success. For example, Sachin Tendulkar, a famous Indian cricketer. He is the only cricketer in the world who has scored hundred international centuries. His life is very clean and focused. He was always trying to make himself better over and over. He has never tried to defeat his competitor. Today people and even media salute him because he is a pure and transparent hero.
In sum, the society should be cautious in selecting someone as their idol. And also media should remain unbiased for gathering the original information and should make them widespread in the society. So that people can get the right information and real heroes would not be criticized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...hey find out any point that defames the persons reputation, they make it widespread thr...
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Line 6, column 391, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ple is Lance Armstrong, cycling legend. Once people discovered that he was taking dr...
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Line 6, column 600, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n if he would be vindicated from blame. The second reason is that the media is a...
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Line 17, column 35, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... However, there are certain heroes who are heroes in real life. They have chosen t...
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Line 17, column 231, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...y cricketer in the world who has scored hundred international centuries. His life is ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98368298368 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59612552602 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503496503497 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2434126558 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8125 118.986275619 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.40625 23.4991977007 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.1875 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232716193609 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588579307381 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797070063789 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114809888065 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557451806728 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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