In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
it is certain that we live in very intensive media world and its impaction become more important so we cannot underestimate its role. The author's assert seems plausible at a glance but it needs to be think carefully and from various perspective. What is a here? A hero is not a saint, rather he/she is a person who help our lives and give some positive impact to the world. my point will be illustrated in the following text.
one reason for my fundamental disagreement with the speaker is that intensive mass media could help the wide spreading of hero's good deed and contribution which he/she made. A contrary view would reveal that mass media has the nagative effect on people's privacy and could tarnish their reputation, for instance, Bill Clinton, the ex-president in United State, had experienced broad and insentive media coverage regarding an affiar with Monique Rwinsky, and his reputation as a president and family guy had been dimineshed. however, it is also frequent that hidden hero became known to the public by the mass media coverage. For example, the Captain Sully who was a pilot in US airways and landed the plain in the Hudson River in Manhattan, and all the passengers and flight attendances on board had survived.
Furthermore, even if media covered and scupulated someone's faults or negative things, it do not imply their reputation has diminished. those who would oppose the speaker might point out that some people who had stepped down or renounce his/her position or reputation because of the defame by mass media. examples from .... aptly illustrate the speaker's point. however, For instance, Steve Jobs experienced numerous coverage about the birth of his daughter and his exit from Apple when he was young. but still he is evaluated as one of the most primeere and successful CEO in twenthi century after his past.
In short, it is very common that heroes became be reverated or rejected by the public based on the intensive mass media coverage. but it is also clear that there are a lot of realistic examples of maintaining reputation because of the contribution they made, even if experienced the negative information covered by media. Moreover, media is also a effective way of introducing unknown hero in our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, for example, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9708994709 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71025191286 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4283242474 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147161709417 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404510172082 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04613678209 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865409096246 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520206208138 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.