I disagree with this issue which stats that an ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients.
It also points out that through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
The doctor is a person which have knowledge about the diseases and their harmful effect and how to stop their deleterious effect.
For an ailing patient, it is not easy to understand the report of him. If he try to understand the report and then give advice to another patient who is suffering from same disease, then it is also possible that technical is not good for him.
In world, all people are different from others and all have different capacity and power. So, it is possible that some medicine is useful for some patients and some are not useful them for same diseases. It depend on patient and their thinking.
Because of this doctor never give medicine to patient which is not appropriate for him.
So that for same disease medicines are different for children and aged person.
It is possible that ailing patient give advice to another afflicted patients but also take care that this advice do not increase their difficulties.
The doctor use same method for same disease to two person.
Then it is possible that one person's health become good in one or two week where another person's health do not improve.
So he ask several question to doctor why his health do not improve and why one person cure very fast and then their confidence and belief on doctor is reduced.
Also, I cites that for same disease person do not go to all doctor and take advice from all doctor.
Always doctors have their own knowledge and their belief and their methods and techniques are different from other doctors.
So patients do same things which are tell by doctor but not for all doctor.
It is also require that patient keep trust on their doctor because doctors are not magician who cure you immediately.
In conclusion, I want to say the patients always keep patience and keep positive mind so that he cure as fast as possible.
If in your mind, you have any negative things about disease and fear and lack of confidence on him or doctor then you cannot get up fastly.
Always keep mind fresh and do accordingly to doctor's advice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
... to understand the report of him. If he try to understand the report and then give ...
^^^
Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...e not useful them for same diseases. It depend on patient and their thinking. Because...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...ncrease their difficulties. The doctor use same method for same disease to two per...
^^^
Line 11, column 52, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...use same method for same disease to two person. Then it is possible that one persons ...
^^^^^^
Line 12, column 71, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...ersons health become good in one or two week where another persons health do not imp...
^^^^
Line 12, column 90, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...e good in one or two week where another persons health do not improve. So he ask sever...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 7, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
...r persons health do not improve. So he ask several question to doctor why his heal...
^^^
Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'several questions'.
Suggestion: several questions
...rsons health do not improve. So he ask several question to doctor why his health do not improve...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 16, column 9, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'cite'
Suggestion: cite
...lief on doctor is reduced. Also, I cites that for same disease person do not go ...
^^^^^
Line 18, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'told'.
Suggestion: told
.... So patients do same things which are tell by doctor but not for all doctor. It i...
^^^^
Line 19, column 12, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...tor but not for all doctor. It is also require that patient keep trust on their doctor...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, may, similarly, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79562043796 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35678901243 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428223844282 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2736403245 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8571428571 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.19047619048 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.97078651685 362% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346762133938 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121702933812 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158111280316 0.0758088955206 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130403092705 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165543769609 0.0667264976115 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.