An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Choosing a doctor, might first seem like choosing your Uber driver. You see a rating given by similar patients, you'll see the reviews written and then finally when you are convinced, you'll choose and agree for that doctor to do the long awatied heart surgery you have been suffereing for days or months even sometimes years. However, choosing your doctor and wating for your turn while suffering is not like wating for your next Uber driver to finish his ride and come to you maximum 30 minutes later. This is very different; you are in pain, you're suffering from the illness you are trying get rid off and for that matter you might not be in a condition where you are abel to make a decision to choose your doctor after a meticulous consideration of your options. An ailing patient might only consider the fastest or he or she might only consider the time to ameliorate the pain; and their choice might not be the best fit for the job. For that matter, reviews on doctors are not as expressive of the doctors ability as you rate your Uber dirver. Mistakes can be done on through the process of treating the patient, but a single death out of 100 doesn’t make the doctor significantly bad. There are several reasons that the person could have died such as the condition he had while coming in, the drug administration given by the nursing staff and the like. On the contrary, having a relaly good review and reputation doesn't also mean that the doctor is better fit to treat you. I remember on the local Ethiopian news a year ago, there was this really respected doctor speciallaizing in internal medicine doing 4 surgeries in a period of 3 months to the same patient after mistakely diagnosing the patient three times. The patient could have gone to a diffrent doctor and have her illness diagnosed properlly and given a proper treatment. Such errors somtimes arise from the fact that these doctors have a lot of patietns that they are doing their job in such a hurry. While patietnts wait for their choosen doctor, they might aggravate their condition, because there are doctors, for instance in Ethiopia, where your turn could be as far as a month or two. This could lead to realy fatal conditions on the patients and even getting the doctor of their choice might not alleviate their medical condition. Some medical conditions are like a time bomb, if not treated timely, they could lead to sever condition and even sometimes death. Choosing your doctors could have benefits if the patient is not time constrained and is on the right condition to critically examine and decide it's doctor. The doctor might be really good as expressed on it's review, but the disadvantages out way its benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...see a rating given by similar patients, youll see the reviews written and then finall...
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Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...nd then finally when you are convinced, youll choose and agree for that doctor to do ...
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Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'even'.
Suggestion: sometimes even
...have been suffereing for days or months even sometimes years. However, choosing your doctor an...
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Line 1, column 544, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...his is very different; you are in pain, youre suffering from the illness you are tryi...
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Line 1, column 1003, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...on doctors are not as expressive of the doctors ability as you rate your Uber dirver. M...
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Line 1, column 1425, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ing a relaly good review and reputation doesnt also mean that the doctor is better fit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, really, so, then, while, even so, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69831223629 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44942887074 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495780590717 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5959989005 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8823529412 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220162017219 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865297922241 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471573334685 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220162017219 0.150359130593 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.