All college students should be required to take math courses even if the students have no interest in math

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All college students should be required to take math courses, even if the students have no interest in math.

We live in a increasingly most data oriented world where everything need to be linked with most mathematical calculations to survive and to maintain in this
computer driven world .The prompt suggests that college students must require mathematical knowledge even though they are not interested in it .in my opinion
i strongly agree with the prompt and one should have a enough knowledge in mathematics at least some basic calculations to sustain in life.

Mathematics is basement for each and every subject . It is base for all the industries like mechanical , civil , electrical , computer and satellite systems even
sometimes a small mathematical mistake can lead to be a big trouble for a computer technology and a small error can lead to collapsing a building, a small mathematical
mistake might lead to submerge titanic ship , and not only these
areas but it should be a necessary subject even to sustain our life , for instance buying some groceries in the store would require a mathematical knowledge.

Sometimes a big problem can be solved with the simple mathematical logic and equations, it plays a very major role in medical system with the help of artificial intelligence
and machine learning which deal with all the mathematical equations and provides a realtime solution to the patents in medical diagnosis even which can not be
treated from doctors . mathematics proves its power not only in medical systems , but also in lot of manufacturing industries , robotics and many more .

With the help of mathematics a man can reach to space and moon and obviously it will not be possible if neil amstrong leave mathematics as a optional subject in his college days,
the beauty of mathematics can calculate the distance between 2 stars and even from two galaxies . it is used to calculate the speed of light , velocity of sound ,
density of water , and can be used to measure the climatic conditions and acknowledge natural hazards and take care ourself.

In conclusion , mathematics is a very important subject which can not be ignored in any field of study , directly or indirectly all the sectors of education will be interlinked with
mathematics.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tions to survive and to maintain in this computer driven world .The prompt sugges...
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...maintain in this computer driven world .The prompt suggests that college student...
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...intain in this computer driven world .The prompt suggests that college students m...
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...ven though they are not interested in it .in my opinion i strongly agree with th...
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...ree with the prompt and one should have a enough knowledge in mathematics at leas...
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...s is basement for each and every subject . It is base for all the industries like ...
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...e for all the industries like mechanical , civil , electrical , computer and satel...
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...l the industries like mechanical , civil , electrical , computer and satellite sys...
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...ies like mechanical , civil , electrical , computer and satellite systems even so...
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Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'even'.
Suggestion: sometimes even
...trical , computer and satellite systems even sometimes a small mathematical mistake can lead t...
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...lapsing a building, a small mathematical mistake might lead to submerge titanic s...
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...take might lead to submerge titanic ship , and not only these areas but it should...
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...cessary subject even to sustain our life , for instance buying some groceries in t...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'mathematical knowledge'.
Suggestion: mathematical knowledge
...me groceries in the store would require a mathematical knowledge. Sometimes a big problem can be solv...
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... medical diagnosis even which can not be treated from doctors . mathematics prove...
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... which can not be treated from doctors . mathematics proves its power not only i...
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...es its power not only in medical systems , but also in lot of manufacturing indust...
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... also in lot of manufacturing industries , robotics and many more . With the he...
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...ring industries , robotics and many more . With the help of mathematics a man c...
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...e if neil amstrong leave mathematics as a optional subject in his college days, ...
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...tween 2 stars and even from two galaxies . it is used to calculate the speed of li...
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...en 2 stars and even from two galaxies . it is used to calculate the speed of light...
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... is used to calculate the speed of light , velocity of sound , density of water ...
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...e the speed of light , velocity of sound , density of water , and can be used to...
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... and take care ourself. In conclusion , mathematics is a very important subject...
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...can not be ignored in any field of study , directly or indirectly all the sectors ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, at least, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14689265537 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9913974542 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 23.0359550562 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.616904742 60.3974514979 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.75 118.986275619 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.25 23.4991977007 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.21951772744 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.97078651685 282% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153781184434 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061853795918 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454850246043 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575164162182 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494604309463 0.0667264976115 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 14.1392134831 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 48.8420337079 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.1743820225 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.2143820225 175% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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