All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
It is a good idea to give parents options to volunteer time in their children’s schools because it is beneficial for teachers, parents, and students. Though, volunteering should not be required due to time, money, and parents’ situations.
Parents can definitely have a better and deeper connection with their children and also with school teachers when they participate in school activities with their children. For example, parents can see how their kids interact with other students and also with their teachers, so they can know and understand their kids much better. In addition, when parents spend time with their children and show them how important children are for them, it encourages and motivates students to learn and study better.
Additionally, every parent has a different background and topic to talk about and share it with students which can make many opportunities for students to learn more passionately. The parents with nutrition background can talk about healthy ways to eat or even have a small cooking session of preparing healthy meals which will encourage students to pay more attention to their food choices and avoid junk foods.
However, schools should not make it mandatory for parents to spent their time in their children’s schools. The reason is some parents are really busy with work and do not have time to volunteer. Also, some children may live with their old grandparents who are tired and old to come to school. Imagine students with disable parent who cannot come to school. Other students might ask that student that why he/her parents are not showing up which can make students embraced in front of other students. Those students of disable or poor parents can be mocked by other students which will break their hearts.
It is obvious that volunteering time by parent in their children school is beneficial in many perspectives, but it should be under optional situations not required. The reason is some parents cannot come to schools for understandable reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to schools for understandable reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15548780488 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67775103581 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481707317073 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9121867143 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27783047326 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128293490668 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476124470978 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190189058019 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475755142107 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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