All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position
Parents of the children should voulunteer time for their children's school as much as possible in order to improve the well-being of their child and contribute to make him a well rounded individual.
First of all, parents should devote some of the time out of their busy schedule to improve the mental well-being of child. A few children are timorous and are less-talkative. It is important to understand the underlying cause in order to help them overcome their weakness. Some children are shy and are socially awkward. Living in a seclusion often takes toll on the mental health. In some cases the children may have imaginary fears which stop them from pursuing certain activities in the school. By volunteering parents can learn about the strength and weakeness of child and train him accordingly to improve his well-being. For instance, some children do not participate in playing sports for the fear of injury or may be because they don't know how to play. It could be any reason. By spending time with child in the school, parent can insure that their child does not become a laggard. Volunteering in school by parents, thus can help to address the issues child has.
Additionally, by volunteering in school parent can acquire necessary skills to establish rapport with their child. When a parent can better understand their children, they can teach them better when child in his teen. Teenage is characterized by extreme hormonal imbalance and children tend to do something stupid. By establishing mutual understanding, parent can educate their child and keep them from committing a blunder which they may regret at the later point of their life. For example, the rate of teenage pregnancy has been on rise in a few coutries mostyl because of neglect from parent. When the parent volunteer adequate time by voulunteering and educatiing their children, the rate of teenage pregnancy can be reduced. Volunteering the time in school to better educate children about the unintended consequences of their activity is therefore, paramount.
However, some parents can be really busy at a times and can not give out time because they have already alloted it for some other work. Such parents should be exempted from the volunteering only under strict premises.
Therefore, in order to improve the mental and physical well-being of child, all parents should devote some of their time volunteering in the school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07556675063 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77301718774 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465994962217 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5616737899 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5909090909 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0454545455 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219990779026 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787371633397 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426275116186 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154592568728 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152773288751 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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