All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
parents play important roles in children's growth. nowadays, some parents are required to spend time with their children in their school, which can have positive effect on them. however, its effects depend on situation a lot so that not all parents should be required to volunteer their time for their children.
Granted, volunteering time to children's schools is necessary for those whose kids are disabled. this is because disabled kids can do nothing without their parents' help. Helen keller is really good example. When she was young, because of some intimate reasons, she had disability in her eyes and ears. Therefore, her parents went to school with her now that she could not do anything by herself. Furthermore, her parents hired teachers for Helen Keller, Ann Sullivan, who taught her how to express thinking by motion. As a result, Helen Keller was able to get a degree from university nevertheless her disabilities. this was possible only if her parents volunteered their time for Helen Keller. therefore, parents should volunteer their time if their child has disability.
however, not all children need help from their parents. Actually, it can have negative effect on them, being dependent person. we can find good example in American president, Barack Obama. His parents did not spend their time for Obama, to make him independent person. even though they have free time, they did not go to his school, because they wanted him to learn how to solve social problems by himself. As a result, Obama became really independent person and able to easily socialize with others, which played as a thrust to lead many people and finally become first black president of America. As we can see from this example, volunteering time should not be necessary to help children be independent.
Moreover, some parents cannot volunteer their time even though they want to. this is because nowadays, adults are having really busy days. For example, Bill Gates, the ceo of Microsoft sleeps only 4 hours a day. this is because he spends much of his time in his company. this is not the only case for ceo but also common workers. they have to go work in the daytime. like this, some parents should not be required to volunteer their times.
There are more examples like above cases for the reason why it should not be necessary for parents to join their children's school. it is important to make flexible program to make children and their parents spend time together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94698795181 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46103736092 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506024096386 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1847471656 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.3214285714 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8214285714 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235749436969 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761595805043 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077331698301 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165982355577 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693020457397 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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