all too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. if companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary
Companies hiring outside consultants to get their help for effective and smooth operation is a common culture since the last few years. The primary role of consultants is to consult the company or organization in a way that leads to its development. We might think that this can be excluded or the consultants would be unnecessary, if the companies listen to their own employees by making time for them. This may seem like a simple issue but it's more than that.
Consultants are trained professionals with necessary qualifications to understand the situation in the perspective of both company and its employees. They provide suggestions and insights from their knowledge and experience, which normal people may not achieve. Companies with large employee pool would hire outside consultants rather than spending much time and effort themselves while listening to their employees.
In my opinion, hiring consultants is much more effective in the long run compared to make the effort themselves. This situation is credible and valid for MNCs or larger corporations. The situation may not be similar for startups or companies with small employee pool. They have the option of listening to their employees rather than hiring outside consultants.
I disagree to the statement that consultants would be unnecessary, if the companies spend time to listen to their own employees. Even if they did, the inputs which are provided by the consultants are definitely valuable.
- all too often companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently if companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees such consultants would be unnecessary 33
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31330472103 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00497846231 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532188841202 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5023037252 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2307692308 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.505113986301 0.243740707755 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178900682895 0.0831039109588 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116829285879 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327837260603 0.150359130593 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729961468308 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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