The employees are the one who are going to work at last. The problem they are having if discussed more openly then it might be helpful to operate the company more efficiently on the day to day basis. That's the reason for me to mostly agree on the issue mentioned, in the following passage, I will discuss the points due to which I agree, more elaborately and present a case in which some might agrue that it will be possible for a outside consultant to be more beneficial.
The construction project is mainly driven by the labors which work on the site. The uppermanagement has the the role in it, but the laborers are the one who are going to do the work. The upper management might be planning the daily and weekly activities according to there thinking. For a instance the work is proceeding in the way they want then its all good. However, if the are seeing the work is not proceeding according to the schedule they have made because there are might be some problems prevailing o the site level which they are unaware of. The best solution would be to interact with the laborers and find the solution to the prevaling problem. If they are going to consult an third party consultant about the solution they sost probably would also look at the problem prevailing at the site level for providing the best solution. Then whats the need of a consultant. They are inturn going to increase the cost to the company Instead, they can distribute the money to the employers in this case laborers which will help their motivation to work hard and more efficiently.
Some one would counter that a third party can provide more better solution because they would might have dealed with the similar problem elsewere or if problem is too difficult. Not necessarily. Its true but the case of the more difficult problem would also be as difficult for them also. The company too have smart employees that can deal with it the same way a consultant would. Talking about the better solution it might not be the case as well. Because looking upon carefully about the problem and well scrutinizing it, it might be very much possible to end up upon a solution as good as them or even better. And also implementing that solution we can modify it to make it better and better as the time progresses. So, in conclusion, a company will benefit from the time spent listening to their employees for carrying out the works more efficiently rather than seeking help from the consultant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
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Message: Did you mean 'Someone'?
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Suggestion: better
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Suggestion: as well
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Message: Did you mean 'to have'?
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...as difficult for them also. The company too have smart employees that can deal with it t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, third, well, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62785388128 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5365995494 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438356164384 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.989899984 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.684210526 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0526315789 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259085477927 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779818769269 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077007761555 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201865565428 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558425282499 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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