All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Payments for information and experiences have been accepting since globalization started, with many companies providing suggestion service and professional consultants to another companies. It’s very significant to get help from consultants in order to effectively operate the company rather than merely listening to the employee simply. In fact, managing a company is extremely difficult beyond our imagine, listening to employee can’t eradicate all problems.
Communicating with employees merely help operating company during which the company need to improve its relationships between managers and workers. Nevertheless, there are much more problems focus on budgets, market, even direction of company which can’t be determined by listing employees. For example, Steve jobs, a great business man and the father of Apple, required his company producing mobile phones according his personal preference. Although many people even his employees disagreed his decision at that time, the market proved his decision is right later.
The consultants can observe the company from outside which is different from the inside employer and employees, discovering and eradicating problems totally. For example, Kodak, which was a successful company on producing photography camera. they realized the digital time was coming and prepared for it.Although they invented the first digital camera, unfortunately Kodak bankrupted at 2013. Because they thought they had prepared for the digital enough, but Kodak seemed do nothing from outside. If an insightful consultant had suggested Kodak give up all traditional camera and put all budgets on digital camera, the history of Kodak would have changed.
In conclusion, operating company not only need to listen employees, but also face all aspects of problem.Therefore, the consultants, who are professional and experienced, could necessarily help the company work with efficiency.
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- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.Write a response in which you discu 50
- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary. 50
- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to operate' or 'operate'.
Suggestion: to operate; operate
...ommunicating with employees merely help operating company during which the company need t...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ompany on producing photography camera. they realized the digital time was coming an...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...tal time was coming and prepared for it.Although they invented the first digital camera,...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...s, but also face all aspects of problem.Therefore, the consultants, who are professional ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 279.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93548387097 5.05705443957 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05949199342 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.4932671777 129% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3604285953 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 127.384615385 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318065201106 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11383478476 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569058374052 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190849195557 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307001029644 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 48.8420337079 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.17 12.1639044944 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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