Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Being a leader denotes a lot of things that should not be underestimated. Leadership qualities include but not limited to boldness, thinking uncharacteristically as well as in favor of its crowd, doing things that can be harsh in the moment and taking risks that not everyone has the strength to do so. As good as maintaining the respect of his or her peers is, it is equally important to manage and make important decisions that affect the leaders members and its kind. So, I think that the leader should have a balance of leadership qualities such as maintaining an environment of harmony, lessen the chaos,continue the respect from peers and continue making smarter choices to help the people collectively move forward and create a balance.
We can take the example of Elon Musk. Elon Musk bought twitter when it had the debt of 12.5 billion dollars. He knew it was not an easy job and some drastic changes would be needed in order to stabilize the company and make ludicrous profits. Musk overtook the company during a time of a pandemic era where a lot of workers couldn't afford to go to the office for health and hygiene reasons. However, Musk post-pandemic ordered almost every employee to come to office as it bolsters productivity of employees. In addition, to bringing them in the office, he also fired 40% of his work force. As harsh, ruthless and inhumane this may sound to cut staff during a post pandemic era where people are struggling economically and mentally, it proved to be a good decision in retrospect. Twitter now has 1300 employees, is pushing for 8$ subscriptions, more advertisements to help twitter make more money to cover the whooping 12 billion debt. Looking back, only few people would take this extreme step and that is what distinguishes them from leaders. As important as it was to gain respect from his peers, it was much more important to make cost cuts and have a stable company that can have a bright future.
On the other hand, it is important to obtain respect from the members of the company, group community while making big decisions. For example, president voting on issues, such as death penalties it is extremely important to get the opinion of the citizens on the country, get their vote on them and make a decision that everyone respects as it is a law that affects every citizen of the country. However, part of being a leader is deciding when it is the time to gain respect of peers and when it is the time to use ability to make austere decisions which can benefit people in the long term.
With this, we can conclude that looking at leadership only through the eye of gaining respect from others is a one dimensional regardless of how important that factor is. Through examples of Elon musk and others, we can culminate our essay by arguing that leadership has multiple roles and duties and it is harmful to say that respect is more important than ability to be an effective leader.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...s crowd, doing things that can be harsh in the moment and taking risks that not everyone has ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 609, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , continue
...environment of harmony, lessen the chaos,continue the respect from peers and continue mak...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...f a pandemic era where a lot of workers couldnt afford to go to the office for health a...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 827, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$8'.
Suggestion: $8
... now has 1300 employees, is pushing for 8$ subscriptions, more advertisements to h...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2423.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 515.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70485436893 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72689809679 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499029126214 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 754.2 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.57180162 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.526315789 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1052631579 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190456838068 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559767678514 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672367138952 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127309871325 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450633247178 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...s crowd, doing things that can be harsh in the moment and taking risks that not everyone has ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 609, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , continue
...environment of harmony, lessen the chaos,continue the respect from peers and continue mak...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...f a pandemic era where a lot of workers couldnt afford to go to the office for health a...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 827, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$8'.
Suggestion: $8
... now has 1300 employees, is pushing for 8$ subscriptions, more advertisements to h...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2423.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 515.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70485436893 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72689809679 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499029126214 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 754.2 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.57180162 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.526315789 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1052631579 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190456838068 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559767678514 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672367138952 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127309871325 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450633247178 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.