In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
In any structure/body, The top brass is exercised decisive and super power in policy making. So long term exercising power leads to corruption, inefficiency and stagnation. So new leadership by time to time may learn the mistakes of his successors, may take the dynamic decision and may become a reformer.
Business,politics,education and government is playing very important role and effect largess. In a business, The decisions of top management always effects its profit and lose. In a government,entire country may effect like a education the students. The common aspect of all these fields are corruption, inefficiency, dynamic nature and governance.
Corruption has many dimensions/forms.
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- In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing a 50
- In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing a 41
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , politics
... and may become a reformer. Business,politics,education and government is playing ver...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , entire
...cts its profit and lose. In a government,entire country may effect like a education the...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ose. In a government,entire country may effect like a education the students. The comm...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...vernment,entire country may effect like a education the students. The common aspe...
^
Discourse Markers used:
['may', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.33064516129 0.240241500013 138% => OK
Verbs: 0.0967741935484 0.157235817809 62% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104838709677 0.0880659088768 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0322580645161 0.0497285424764 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0161290322581 0.0444667217837 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0725806451613 0.12292977631 59% => OK
Participles: 0.0241935483871 0.0406280797675 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 4.07763736486 2.79330140395 146% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0161290322581 0.030933414821 52% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0967741935484 0.0997080785238 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0322580645161 0.0249443105267 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0148568991511 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 699.0 2732.02544248 26% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 104.0 452.878318584 23% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.72115384615 6.0361032391 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.19343686757 4.58838876751 70% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.413461538462 0.366273622748 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317307692308 0.280924506359 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.259615384615 0.200843997647 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.221153846154 0.132149295362 167% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.07763736486 2.79330140395 146% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 219.290929204 33% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701923076923 0.48968727796 143% => OK
Word variations: 63.2388134069 55.4138127331 114% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6194690265 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 13.0 23.380412469 56% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0146831881 59.4972553346 42% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 141.124799967 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 23.380412469 56% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.674092028746 37% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 44.7307692308 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 2.94444444444 1.64882698954 179% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281864460068 0.391690518653 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0787654230536 0.123202303941 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.032208845735 0.077325440228 42% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.577312184566 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174031804644 0.149214159877 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124013264473 0.161403998019 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085651874974 0.0892212321368 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.160450869688 0.385218514788 42% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.133705297448 0.0692045440612 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156112306581 0.275328986314 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110516391684 0.0653680567796 169% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.