In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Most people aspire to become experts in the fields they find interesting or love. Every expert goes through a beginner phase, learning valuable experiences.
The given prompt states that beginners are more likely to make contributions to a field than the experts. While people may come to such a conclusion based on
the initial drive a beginner has, it's rarely the case. Fresh start with high spirits do take people starting out a long way but it a lot more is needed to
make a substantial contrubution than just that.
Firstly, experts have in-depth knowledge about a field and thus are more likely to make a novel contribution than beginners. Beginners usually lack pre-requisites
and the basic knowledge and are incompetent at their present level. An expert may posses information about a topic which the beginner may have never even heard of and
such a difference in their base information puts odds of a contribution against the beginners.For example, an experienced astrophysicist at NASA is much more likely to
make a significant contribution than a student intern who is just starting out.
Furthermore, experts have significantly more practical and hands-on time than a beginner. This is no surprise as experts generally have worked on personal and team
projects something which requires co-operation and planning. This is something that a person learns with time and is what makes an expert, the expert.
Beginners need several years before they gain these skills and as contributions to the field requires this, it's unlikely that they stand a chance against the experts.
Finally, experts are more likely to invest time, energy, effort and resources for a contribution in the field of their work. This is so as it's something they are good at
and have developed their skillset in. Beginners however are just starting out and such a committment to contribute seems unlikely. What beginners have in their favour is the
drive which comes from being inspired by their peers. These beginners will eventually reach the expert level and make a significant contirbution, something which furthers helps this position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e may come to such a conclusion based on the initial drive a beginner has, its ra...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... on the initial drive a beginner has, its rarely the case. Fresh start with high ...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... long way but it a lot more is needed to make a substantial contrubution than jus...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Beginners usually lack pre-requisites and the basic knowledge and are incompet...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...of a contribution against the beginners.For example, an experienced astrophysicist ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at beginners have in their favour is the drive which comes from being inspired by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20869565217 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90446353439 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3398271473 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.705882353 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.97078651685 282% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241678334728 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883952357881 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056898538283 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961009395255 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361129259846 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.