For promising future of certain field contribution by an individual is required. Individual contribution is an essential factor in determining the future success of any field. Experienced person are familiar with the field and their contribution is considerably important factor. Whereas novice is not through with system or field. Diligent novel person always eager to work and hence efforts of an inexperienced individual are essential when development is considered. Although contributions made by experienced people always have some higher merit whereas abundant efforts of a rookie are always a great factor in achieving success.
Inquiring any field, it is conspicuous that contributions made by the beginner is more important. Just After entering particular field a person filled with full of zeal and confidence. This confidence leads them to do important quality work rather than quantity work. They are eager to work and utilize all of the time without being extravagant-they are parsimonious with time. They justify their wages by providing enough quality work. For instance, Computer engineering field is one of the emerging fields nowadays. Any newcomer after entering IT industry values time and wants to work as hard as possible.
Fields are evolving and everyone should abreast of current technology. As newcomer joint industry that person is possess knowledge of currently used technology. This can be used as a huge advantage while taking work from them. Technology is not circumscribe and can be explore as much as one wanted. Beginner always tries to explore new ways from current and future technology. Juxtaposing both current and the future, the rookie can make an essential contribution to the particular field. Newly qualified, updated with current trends and needs of society, one novice can be equal to the 10 experienced person in terms of contribution to society.
Erudite Experts are experienced person and possess the deep and detailed knowledge of a particular field. As time passes new technologies discovered and this is incorporated in study. Experts have studied the subject a long time ago with obsolete technologies. Then they have to study new technology which is equal to the novice who is learning that technology in curricula. hundred million dollar fact is that worth time one spends on a particular subject at college is much more than one who is study it at own. And hence beginner who has just completed study have much more time to explore things. After considering this fact one can say that beginner should have higher contribution impact than experts.
An important contribution of experts should be taken into account. Person have some experience and at a difficult stage these incisive skills are at the shield. As mentioned earlier, Beginner is a person who is with full of energy and updated with current trends in technology. It is unshakably agreeable that in any field contribution of beginner has higher priority than experts because of presented reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 352, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Diligent
...e is not familiar with system or field. diligent efforts made by novice should not be ig...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ork. They are eager to work and utilize all of the time without being extravagant. They va...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e should abreast of current technology. As newcomer joint industry that person is ...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...orough knowledge of a particular field. as time passes new technologies discovered...
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Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hundred
... learning that technology in curricula. hundred million dollar fact that worth time one...
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Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
... learning that technology in curricula. hundred million dollar fact that worth time one...
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Line 7, column 575, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...y have much more time to explore things.After considering this fact one can say that ...
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Line 7, column 575, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y have much more time to explore things.After considering this fact one can say that ...
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Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Beginner
... are at the shield. As mentioned earlier,Beginner is a person who is with full of energy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2568.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28395061728 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01210673905 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430041152263 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 822.6 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.514676318 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.48148148148 5.21951772744 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149596980493 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473954415191 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334625098792 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913123933216 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283363217053 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.