Human Being is the only living animal who has the ability to think and develop.In the race of gaining opulence, the human is trying to do things that are directly jeopardizing the nature.In past decades the behavior of people towards the environment is not justifiable.People are using natural resources as granted, they only consider themselves worthy to use these resources.Several decades ago,Color of the earth is lucidly green seen from the celestial.Removal of Environmental species jeopardize the situation on earth as natural resources are diminishing in amount.Humans have already shown lackadaisical attitude toward environment,they cannot regenerate that area but remaining area with natural resources should be emphasize great attention and care.It is unshakably agreeable that humans should preserve the remaining environment which has precious natural resources.
Earth is the only planet on the universe that have environment for life.Nature has provided precious resources to be used by the all living organisms including Humans.With brain Humans have only think of themselves.They have used plethora of resources in their benefits.Now there is very small amount is remaining.Government should pass a law to preserve remaining resources.Because Resources are benefits economically to people there may be plenty of critics who will criticize it but it is necessary.For instance,Trees are used for many purpose and removing trees and using it's wood is benefit to humans.But law should restrain them to do this.
Wilderness areas may be the only area remaining for animals to live.Humans have occupied almost major spaces on the earth.If this places are used for development or some economic gain than shelter of the animals will be in trouble.Suffering due to activities of humans,animals does not have other shelters.And evidently,all living organisms have equal chance for using resources provided by nature.enfeeblement of law preserve this areas.That is why law is necessary to preserve remaining wilderness areas.
Critics will censor the laws which are restrain the people from gaining access to area where one can develop economical solution for betterment of people.But this areas should be preserve;scant of these area will eventually create problem for humans,ultimately.If humans want to survive on the earth then they should be very careful in preserving this lands.Humans must show assiduous attitude toward preserving this area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71934604905 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52915632316 2.79657885939 126% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523160762943 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 91.0 23.0359550562 395% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.891681009 60.3974514979 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 524.75 118.986275619 441% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 91.75 23.4991977007 390% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 7.80617977528 487% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272241665854 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192122665694 0.0831039109588 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488293566798 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192122665694 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488293566798 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.4 14.1392134831 364% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -37.81 48.8420337079 -77% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.92365168539 256% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.1 12.1743820225 338% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.08 12.1639044944 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.75 8.38706741573 152% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 65.0 11.8971910112 546% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.4 11.2143820225 342% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.