Popular opinion is crucial for a leader’s decision because the leader needs to know concerns and requirements of his team as much as possible. However, I believe that leaders should not be quickly and easily influenced by those opinions according to the reasons provided in the following essay.
First, many important actions need time to consider carefully before making decision. The popular opinion may come from the short-term demand, which is not considered the long-term consequences, so it can have negative effects in the long term. For example, if an industrial area needs more electric power to increase the production capacity, the leader who is easily influenced by the popular opinion may suddenly decide to build a new power plant to serve the demand of the area. The industry may be satisfied with this quick action but, in the long term, the power plant will generate a lot of pollution. The environment will be totally damaged and no one want to live in that area anymore. Therefore, this leader will not accomplish in the development of this area.
Second, large projects require long time to finish and, if leaders frequently change their minds, these projects will never be finished. For instance, it may take five to ten years to plan and construct a new airport and, during that time, many people may not want to wait such a long time and propose the government to do other short-term projects. The leader who is quickly influenced by the change in opinions will consider to halt the airport construction and allocate the budget to other projects to satisfy their people. Consequently, the country will lost a lot of money and time in the unfinished project without any return. The leader who continues the large projects to be finished one by one will finally be able to show their people final results of all accomplished projects.
Some may argue that leaders should follow all requirements of their people, so the leader’s action should be changed when the public opinion change. This is not true because some requirements of people may not be suitable for the country. Leaders who have a lot of experts in their team have a responsibility to consider each requirement carefully before selecting the most suitable things to their people.
All in all, leader who want to accomplish in their tasks should not quickly and easily influenced by popular opinions. They should spend enough time to consider all causes and effects before taking the most suitable choice.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
The essay is not exactly right on the topic.
The topic is not about 'leaders should not be quickly and easily influenced by those opinions'
but
'Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little'
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 417 350
No. of Characters: 2032 1500
No. of Different Words: 189 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.519 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.873 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.565 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.84 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.556 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.063 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider halting'.
Suggestion: consider halting
...fluenced by the change in opinions will consider to halt the airport construction and allocate t...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
... all accomplished projects. Some may argue that leaders should follow all requirem...
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Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...before taking the most suitable choice.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225596529284 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.154013015184 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0824295010846 0.0880659088768 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.060737527115 0.0497285424764 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0260303687636 0.0444667217837 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0954446854664 0.12292977631 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0325379609544 0.0406280797675 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67992022413 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0455531453362 0.030933414821 147% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.125813449024 0.0997080785238 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0433839479393 0.0249443105267 174% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0151843817787 0.0148568991511 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2513.0 2732.02544248 92% => OK
No of words: 417.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02637889688 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.381294964029 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287769784173 0.280924506359 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179856115108 0.200843997647 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112709832134 0.132149295362 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67992022413 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 219.290929204 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470023980815 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 51.1685374276 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1666666667 23.380412469 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7577153532 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.611111111 141.124799967 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 23.380412469 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 51.9436450839 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.46846846847 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399526494327 0.391690518653 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13388751427 0.123202303941 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.077948070478 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.582474269679 0.547984918172 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138600132254 0.149214159877 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173398545393 0.161403998019 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840813922497 0.0892212321368 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.368313646433 0.385218514788 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0840695171114 0.0692045440612 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272814720959 0.275328986314 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689503848516 0.0653680567796 105% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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