In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this effort has failed: the number of accidents has not decreased, and, based on reports by the highway patrol, many drivers are exceeding the speed limit. Prunty County should instead undertake the same kind of road improvement project that Butler County completed five years ago: increasing lane widths, resurfacing rough highways, and improving visibility at dangerous intersections. Today, major Butler County roads still have a 55 mph speed limit, yet there were 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this past year than there were five years ago.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
While it may seems that by implementing road improvement project like Butler County, Prunty County will have less number of road accidents .But there is lot of weakness in the arguement.
It is stated by lowering speed limit,number of accidents has not decreased but it is not known if the percentage of accidents has increased or decreased. Maybe the population of Prunty County has increased. Or economic condition had become better. More
people are going for road trips. Trade conditions has become better. Maybe the number of cars in Prunty County has increased so there might have been an increase in no. of accident but decrease in percentage of accident.
Furthermore, there is no indication of conditions of Prunty County highway, lane width,roughness of highways and visibility is never mentioned. It can be in better state than Butler County Highway.
But trafic in Butler County might be less than that in Prunty County , so speed of 55 mph is appropriate for it . But Prunty
County require much less speed limit.
Moreover,data is not sufficient for analysis .There is 25 percent fewer accidents reported in Butler city this past year than there were five year ago. But we don't know if there were increase or decrease in number of accidents in past one or two year. Five years ago , both the counties might have less traffic so the number might have decreased for both.
So without complete information and data , it cannot be concluded
that undertaking the same kind of project will decrease the number of accidents in Prunty County.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 259.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02316602317 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73762146168 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509652509653 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
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Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970419325862 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614710495681 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128835142704 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587454959675 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.