Road safety is of utmost importance. The following argument provides efficient ways to improve road safety in the Prunty County, but on further analysis it has many loopholes that need to accessed. Comparing two different counties and concluding that same methods can be implemented to tackle the same problem will be incorrect as there are many parameter involved while finding a solution.
Firsty the argument fails to mention the population count and the number of highways in both the counties. There may be a case that the population is dropping in Butler County and the number of highway is increasing than Prunty County , then , as a result the rate of accidents will drop. In the last five years people must be more cautios while driving on the highway which might have resulted in the fall in percentage. The argument does not prove that due to the safety measure implemented there was a drop in the rate of accidents.Moreover, an accident can be caused by negligence of the driver. If a person is following all the safety guidelines and another individual who is not following the rules causes the accident, it cannot be reported as a highway accident. The safety measures like widening of the highway lane, resurfacing rough highways did not play any role to prevent this accident. Therefore implemeting the same methods in the Butler county may or may not help in lowering the speed limit.
We are also not aware about the demographics of both the counties. Prunty County has more are to widen their lanes but the Butler county has a smaller area , then implementing the safety methods will be difficult.There may not be adequate resources in the Butler county which may prevent the application of the safety rules.Also we need an insight on how many daily commuters use the highway and the accident rate given in the passage is imited to only one highway or all the highways in the respective counties.If there are many commuters in the Butler county , investing resources to improve the safety limit will be useful but if there are less people using the highway other methods like fine can be implemented where the person who exceeds the speed limit has to pay the fine.This will make the citizens more aware and cautious.
The argument has many fallacies, that need to be thrown light on. If any of the above conditions turns out to be true it will be futile in investing resources on the road safety project for the butler county.
Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
- The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local newspaper quot Commuters complain that increased rush hour traffic on Blue Highway between the suburbs and the city center has doubled their commuting time The favored proposal of the motorists 66
- In an attempt to improve highway safety Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways But this effort has failed the number of accidents has not decreased and based on reports by the highway patro 66
- Teachers salaries should be based on their students academic performance Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to address the most compelling r 50
- Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2240.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 462.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84848484848 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65891518932 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 722.7 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.860078465 60.3974514979 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.0 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278796696025 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847720327875 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748411959597 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129239198986 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123445121961 0.0667264976115 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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